Haiku

I should have never issued the challenge--first I got spanked, correctly so, for using the wrong form in my poems.  Hey, it's been a while since I have written any thing like this, and I erred.  Correctible errors, and I will fix them.

Then, I am clearly shown up my a reader/friend/wordsmith.  Steve Scott shared the following four prizes:

Memories of bliss

Summer heat and azure wave

Autumn comes amiss

Toil of planting past

Promised now the harvest spoil

Settle in to feast

Colors fall from trees

Disambiguated sun

carpets lawn in orange

Time will not relent

Autumn bodes the coming chill

Praise summer well spent

Fantastic!  I can honestly say I have never ever read disambiguated used in a sentence, much less a poem.  Brilliant!  I might add, he said to lightly goad someone into a response, that I have not heard my teacher of haiku respond with her own contribution to the mix...

Here are my and corrections

In garden waiting

No reason but to watch. wait

for summer to fade

Or

Leaves fall, shadowing

flowers and a season's end

Increasingly things change 

I will keep working on these and more, and my inbox is still receiving entries.